April 3, 2014
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Believe NPM #3
I believe
I believe in fairy tales
nightingales and
eating kaleI believe in dandelions
puppy breath and
negative IonsI believe in pennies heads up
grab em all
you'll have good luckI believe in being straight
tell the truth
don't be lateI believe in the moon and stars
making wishes
good cigarsI believe that Mountain Tops
are magic places
full of love
and Gods good gracesfour leaf clovers
counting crows
one for sorrows
two for joysI'll just say this is free form again, it's a busy time for me at work, however I sure am enjoying the poetry, I could spend more time studying the different poetry forms but then I wouldn't have time to read all the lovely works of art. Speaking of Mountain Tops...below is one of my favorite mountains.
Brasstown Bald is the highest natural point in the state of Georgia, USA, with a summit elevation of 4,784 feet above mean sea level. The mountain is known to the native Cherokee people as Enotah.
I do believe this is a magical place.
ilym
Comments (16)
Lovely poem. It had me smiling... especially the mountain tops full of love and God's good graces.
Well, I see that today is believe. LOL
I wasn't sure what it was about.
yes,and it's cheap too. LOL
good food and good company.
there is a horse shoe with wood that says,"Home is where the army says it is." I wasn't in the service but I always laugh when I see this at the antique mall
That's really nice but I hope you don't smoke cigars. It doesn't match your picture.
I am so happy that you are writing your feelings so well here Marsha. Your beliefs are my beliefs too. Especially the one about the crows.
ILYM.
Don't worry about the various forms of poetry. Just write what comes into your mind. Trying hard to go with formal poetry form becomes a pain in the neck and appears more forced and not too cool. In my opinion. sometimes you lose the reason for writing when you try too hard.
Another really nice poem! I'm so happy that you are joining in the fun - I can't imagine anyone who doesn't believe in dandelions and 4 leaf clovers! Lovely!!
I love your poem, Marsha! It puts together many things -- simple & complex -- that make up our wonderful world!
I also enjoy learning new things -- like the things you share about in the last paragraph about that beautiful mountain!
As your newest? follower, I must ask: ilym? (I love you Marsha?)
I love your poetry. I am impressed.
Nice job!!
frank
I love this one, and we have the negative ions here this afternoon, as the rain comes to cool us off from a beautifully warm sunny morning in the mid 70s.
RYC: Good evening, Marilyn. Yes, I am really enjoying the poems, & the variety of poetic form, as well as the many approaches to the prompts!
Thank you for sharing the meaning of ILYM. I'm so sorry about the loss of your son.That is a very special thing that the friend said to you. God does help us through the toughest of times. I'm sure that you hold close many very precious memories of your oldest son. God bless you & continue to give you His comfort & peace.
I was filling a bean bag because it was getting flat. The 'bean' get squished and I refill them every once in awhile.
I love the mountains although I like Indiana because it's home.
I'm with you on the Noah movie. It's sad that the writer doesn't know his Creator.
I love this poetry ,Marsha . It is so much inspited
Compliments
Love
Michel
I'm so glad you believe in all of these things!
Beautifully expressed in your poem!
HUGS!!!
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